Saturday, October 23, 2010

Blog 4 Feedback of Digital Story

The story I read first is "Go Buckeyes".
He wrote what he did at the football game, what he felt at the game, and why others should watch it. He said that it was very nice experience to him, and encouraged people to watch it at the stadium. After read his story, I would watch the game at the stadium since he wrote easy to understand and made me to feel same as what he felt at the stadium.
The second story is "My trip to Philippines".
He wrote the journey story to Philippines. He wrote four points of his views at Philippines. What he wrote is so visible that I can easily imagine during read his story. After done reading his story, I felt I would like to visit Philippines soon.

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