In the digital story “what do I want to be when I grow up”, the author, Sarah Hill mainly tell us about the experience she had to deal with the question as seen in the title. She indicated in the story that in the early year she only wanted to go out and show others about her talent. So she went to California to have college education. However after the author graduated she decide to back to the place where she is familiar with. The author then back to Ohio and get 2 more years education in Ohio. That’s the time when she get a brand new idea came to her mind that she could be a adviser or counselor in order to help other student figure out what they want to do when they grow up. She loves her job and she felt happy to help other student to clear their goal for life. The author believed that knowing what goal is couldn’t bring pressure, instead this could be an efficient push towards better life.
The reason I pick this article is that it has a clear story line. The story is told as a form of reminiscing, the word might be simple but pretty much touching. And the author used proper picture with proper stop in the whole story telling. This could help reader to catch the main idea better. Besides the music chimed in adds feelings to this story. Indeed, this could be a outstanding story.
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