I just watched Rachel Vansickel's digital story, named "The ohio state university college of Dentistry". She started with his digital story telling by introducing her first experience of working in Ohio State University. After this she feels that she is challenging new degree in this school by providing health service with professors. She did service to young children. Also, she mentioned about her dental program system, and how she and other dentistry people do service to young children in Ohio State University. She impacted on students who graduated from Ohio State University in Dentistry Major.
I chosed this major because I am thinking of apply to Dental School if I can do well on my major. My major is biology, and this major is related to dentistry major. First, I think this digital story is well organized. She did well to introduce her story from past time to recent time. Also, she points out her goal to work in OSU Dentstry. Second, she spoke with clear pronounciation and fluency. However, I just want to suggest that She needs to put more pictures. Each of her pictures is too long, so audiances might feel bored when she talks. I also want more pictures about providing health care services. If she put more pictures of that, she can emphasize more about her challenging, and her accomplishment.
* I could not hear clearly some part because internet is so slow! It got stuck many times.
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