In the digital story “Mission trip in Costa-Rica” written by Junghyun Hong, there is brief and vivid description and excellent details about a trip of Costa-Rica. Firstly, the author explained the definition of “Mission trip” which is really helpful for understanding this meaningful and special trip. Secondly, I think the most attractive parts of the whole story are that how to cook a living big pig and the experience of mission. Moreover, the article has good organization. But personally, I desire to know the significance of this trip. Additionally, you can talk more about what you learn from this trip and a little more about what kind of hardship and defeat that you have met in the trip besides the positive experience will make the whole story more diverse and various.
Ramis’ article needs a title. After going through this story, I am so interested in the atmosphere of totally different and unique culture of another country. In my opinion, I think he have chosen a very impressive and attractive topic and good introduction to the culture of camels and custom of winter trip. However, I would recommend that he add more details about his own experiences like his own winter trip and his lovely camel. That would be more interesting than simple introduction and statement.
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