Feedback of digital story #4
I really enjoyed reading Ramis’ digital story. It is interesting to know the different people, and different culture. I can never image about live in a desert place with black and brown camels. Camel racing is like a screen from Disney channel for me. I wonder how your camel hugs you, and how they recognize their owners. It’s a pretty good story, but what is the topic for this story? Camels in my hometown or …
Maggie’s digital story really attracts me. I went to Shanghai Exposition this summer, too. It was much crowed, and I can hardly find my friends when I got lost. I recommend working on the topic sentence in the beginning of the story, and sharing your feels about the last trip with your family. How did you feel about traveling with your parents? And the conclusion about this trip.
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