Feedback of digital story blog#4

In the story " The gorgeous city I grown up in ---Xiamen" wrote by Gina Zhang,The portray of the city XIMEN is lively, especially the seafood. I am extremely interested in the shrimp noodle. It must be pretty yummy. I like the lifestyle of people in XIMEN as well as the recreation such as swimming, drinking tea. The starlit sky is also attractive to me. What I always did in my childhood is enjoying watching the star at night. 
But I think the word "undergo" is used like tolerate and it should be "experience". was there any interesting story in your childhood?

In the story of "close to XinJiang" wrote by DongJin Li, the author shows us very vivid pictures about XinJiang.It's so cool to travel in XinJing. I think it's such a breathtaking experience to walk in the desert. Good story and nice picture. The specific detail is excellent. But I think the word in 21st lines "shake" should be "shock", a small mistake.