I misunderstood this #4 Blog. I though all i have to do is just putting the comments on others writing so I submit this now.
I read "Memory pieces from HongKong" written by Gefei Li
His writing makes me buy a ticket to Hong Kong but i need a more information.
After i saw this writing, I really want to go shopping but i was not able to find how cheap products are.
And He said it has both western festival and eastern festival but I can not find what eastern festival is.
I am very satisfied this essay but he need little bit more information in specific i think.
Also, I read Gina Zhang's story, "The gorgeous city I grown up in----Xiamen".
I sympathize with her because my hometown is small surrounded by sea and mountain either. Everybody is not in a hurry comparing the Korea's Capital city, Seoul.
She said Xiamen is in Fujian province but I don't know where Fujian Province is. China is very huge so we need her explanation. If she explained more about the location of her hometown, It would be more helpful to understand this post.
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