Thursday, October 21, 2010

Feedback Blog 4#

          In the article called A trip of Shanghai world Expo,the feelings and what she had got are expressed by the author Yixue Wang.She use a lot of pictures well introduce the sights and buildings in the Shanghai world Expo.I have no experience about Shanghai world Expo before,but after reading her article,I think I have some impressions of the place which has many high-tech things and rich culture in different countries.So the story is easy to read and understand,but it needs more words to talk about the expectations or thoughts about Shanghai .Why Shanghai can hold this Expo but not Xi'an,haha?
           In the article called Close to Xin Jiang,the author well introduce his trip to Xin Jiang.I think article is one of best in the stories.Because the author's words are specific and exact.I do not want to go to Xin Jiang before.Because in my mind it is hot and non-attractive.But after reading those graceful words written by Dongjin Li,'it’s so blue and clean, just like “The Heart of the Ocean” diamond' ,I can see a picture of “SaiLiMu” lake.Thanks for the author ,he had brought me to Xin Jiang already.And what I like also is his good conclusion and specific words,those are what I should learn.

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